[ichijin]

Kay so I have all that done, I added two new attacks to each and changed Piercer, yea he just got stronger D:

Anyways, the theme song is on as well, but this theme song doesn't tell of his story, but more of his overall attitude.

[VileMKII]

So thee hath disguarded my post? For I still seek an anwser.

[ichijin]

I think you can, since I'm using a gun, and nothing's been said about that.

[Altered Tundra]

Originally Posted by VileMKII

So thee hath disguarded my post? For I still seek an anwser.

YOu can be a ranger fighter, there is no rule against that..

Originally Posted by ichijin

Kay so I have all that done, I added two new attacks to each and changed Piercer, yea he just got stronger D:

Anyways, the theme song is on as well, but this theme song doesn't tell of his story, but more of his overall attitude.

Okay accepted, expect my character here shortly, and who knows i might have two chara's

[VileMKII]

Template:
Name: Rummie Vasas
Age: 18
Side: Ice Soldiers
Race: Human
Appearance: Typicaly wears an orange jacket that goes to his belly button. The back holds a red V, which symbolizes his family. Under that he wears a fishnet shirt. His pants are cargo built, and have the color of gray.
His hair is brown, and flows to each side with a bit of wave. The length is to the bottom of his neck. HIs eyes are green, while his face is always clean shaven and zitless.
Personalty: Relaxed and chivilris. Quite a prankster and a joker.
Bio: Orignaly his parents sheltered him, alogn wiht his brother, keeping the truth to life outside his family a secret. Though one fatefull night can that him and his brother sneeked out of their house and headed for a night on the beach with a few grils and other homies. That night however would change Rummie. He was only 14, and had met up with a girl who he found to be most attractive. Their fated meeting was only one step in the chapter of his life, as she was a Yuna. She also was keep secret from the world, only in a diffrent way. THough the two were never to met under any circumstances, they did now. It was almost as if love had happned at first sight.

Thought the timespan of 4 years, Rummie had started to sneek out more and more often. This was simply to meet up with his girl and have her teach him magic. Ever sense a kid he had been obsessed with powers so now his dream was becomeing a realty. He first learned some elmental magic, but soon made his own power, one that was nothign but useing portals. However he remained to use electricty, and then was given the nickname, Midnight Lighting, as the two met around midnight and his likeing of lightning. However, it didn't take long for the army to catch on to what was going on. The Yuna was taken, to unknown whereabouts. The loveing relationship of two destined partners came to a halt.

Now, a recently joined member of the Ice Soldiers, He joined up wiht his brother, Swanson, who was transfered to another unit. His goal of the army is to use it to find his choosen one, and keep her safe no matter what.

Abilities/skills: Has great aim with trowing knifes, and a dead shot with a bow. While useing his weapon of choice he can charge it with an electric pulse, allowing an electric attrubit to it.
Riff Portal: Useing any part of his body, typicaly done with his fingers, Rummie can open a portal to any area within 20 feet of him that he can see. With this oen can cover ground easier, move up hights that could not normaly be reached, or grab a soda while remaining on the couch. (Only one can be made at a time. For every protal there is one where he made it, and where he wants it to go.)
Mega shot move: He can not make one protal in front of him, but has mutipule outputs. Eight to be exact. When something it put into the input portal, it is mutiplied and the same object comes out all eight. (One could now have eight right hands =D)
Weapons: One gold saber, and eight throwing knifes. (bow is not carryed at all times)

Theme song:

YouTube - Gundam seed destiny OST 2 Track 01 Shutsugeki! Impulse

Battle song:

YouTube - Touhou Music: IRON ATTACK! - Cloud Unties Blue

[Strawberry]

Name: Dreagan Sentra
Age: 21
Side: (None)
Race: Mystic
Appearance:
Taking after her mother, she has long wavy silvery blond colored hair, that is tied into a ponytail with a gold ribbon. She has bangs going across her forehead, right above her piercing crystal blue eyes.
She wears a simple tan colored bodice, tied together with golden ribbons.
Dreagan wears plain brown trousers, that cut off about 5” above her ankles, with black sandals. She wears a rope belt and has a black bow, with a golden bowstring, and untranslatable golden writing along the bow. The bow is tied to the belt. She has a black cloak with a plain golden trim. On the cloak there is a hood, and the sleeves of it are slashed up the side for easier movement. The left side of her cloak is also slit up the side, so she has an easy access to her bow. She requires no arrows for ammunition. On her belt there is a simple knife, for backup purposes.

Bio:
Dreagan was born into a family of mystics, raised to train and enhance her magical abilities. Her mother taught her in terms of defense, while her father, offense. Her grandmother, who lived with them at the time, taught her how to heal and use regular herbs and grasses as antidotes and aides. As she trained in the ways of magic, her father made sure she knew some hand to hand combat, encase anything where to go wrong.

The day her family was murdered by thieves, was the day she left and started to travel. She wandered aimlessly, occasionally stopping to train in a small town, and also to stock up on some supplies, before leaving again.

Personality:
She is very concealed and will not open up easily to people. She is very trustworthy and loyal to her friends, if she makes any. She is quiet and cold to most people. Especially males, because the thieves that killed her family where all male. She is strong willed and is very determined. After breaking through her cold exterior, people will be shocked to see how kind and joking she is.

Abilities/skills:
Solar: A magical arrow of fire, generated when the weather is hot or the sun is at its highest peak. Doesn't require much concentration to do, because this was the first thing she learned when training under her father. It can be very strong depending on the temperature, or very weak.

Lunar: A magical arrow of shadows, generated in the night, when the moon is out. Takes about 30 seconds to create, and can fire up to five times. It will only work when the moon is out, and if it is dark. Its strong, but also weak against any forms of light.

Nature: A magical dart, created from nature. All thats required is a piece of growing vegetation, and a bit of magic. Its weak, but can be fatal if struck in the correct spots. Commonly used to poison, or paralyze.

Storm: A very powerful magical arrow, of water, or lightning. Its easily conjured during a storm, and can fire rapidly depending on the rainfall or lightning. The arrow is made from water, every time a raindrop his the bow, and only becomes electrified when a flash of lightning shows. Deadly upon contact, when electrified, but also can hit randomly, like raindrops hitting the ground. Hard to handle, but powerful if correct.

Mega Shot Move:
Redemption: A very powerful magical spell, that doesn't inflict damage...It heals. It works better, depending on how injured the person/creature is. The only downfall, it completely drains the user, because it transfers the users energy to the injured person. Its used, when somebody is dying basically. Unexperienced users may pass out after the completion of the spell. It is very easy to use, but has major downfalls.

Weapons:
A black and gold magical bow.
A simple hunting knife.

Theme song:
Haunted – Evanescence

Battle song:
The Guillotine – Escape The Fate

[Altered Tundra]

Just to clarify; i dont judge templates by length ^^

Originally Posted by VileMKII

Template:
Name: Rummie Vasas
Age: 18
Side: Ice Soldiers
Race: Human
Appearance: Typicaly wears an orange jacket that goes to his belly button. The back holds a red V, which symbolizes his family. Under that he wears a fishnet shirt. His pants are cargo built, and have the color of gray.
His hair is brown, and flows to each side with a bit of wave. The length is to the bottom of his neck. HIs eyes are green, while his face is always clean shaven and zitless.
Personalty: Relaxed and chivilris. Quite a prankster and a joker.
Bio: A recently joined member of the Ice Soldiers, He joined up wiht his brother, Swanson, who was transfered to another unit. (I'll make more once I get the gist of the story)
Abilities/skills: Has great aim with trowing knifes, and a dead shot with a bow. While useing his weapon of choice he can charge it with an electric pulse, allowing an electric attrubit to it.
Mega shot move: With an arroused sensation throughout his body, Rummie simple sends forth a blast of electricty, with a range that goes for miles.
Weapons: One gold saber, and eight throwing knifes. (bow is not carryed at all times)

Theme song:

Battle song:

This one is quite unique, the length might not be a big factor, but the way you sum it down, and use originality is pretty cool..Accepted

Originally Posted by Strawberry

Name: Dreagan Sentra
Age: 21
Side: (None)
Race: Mystic
Appearance:
Taking after her mother, she has long wavy silvery blond colored hair, that is tied into a ponytail with a gold ribbon. She has bangs going across her forehead, right above her piercing crystal blue eyes.
She wears a simple tan colored bodice, tied together with golden ribbons.
Dreagan wears plain brown trousers, that cut off about 5” above her ankles, with black sandals. She wears a rope belt and has a black bow, with a golden bowstring, and untranslatable golden writing along the bow. The bow is tied to the belt. She has a black cloak with a plain golden trim. On the cloak there is a hood, and the sleeves of it are slashed up the side for easier movement. The left side of her cloak is also slit up the side, so she has an easy access to her bow. She requires no arrows for ammunition. On her belt there is a simple knife, for backup purposes.

Bio:
Dreagan was born into a family of mystics, raised to train and enhance her magical abilities. Her mother taught her in terms of defense, while her father, offense. Her grandmother, who lived with them at the time, taught her how to heal and use regular herbs and grasses as antidotes and aides. As she trained in the ways of magic, her father made sure she knew some hand to hand combat, encase anything where to go wrong.

The day her family was murdered by thieves, was the day she left and started to travel. She wandered aimlessly, occasionally stopping to train in a small town, and also to stock up on some supplies, before leaving again.

Personality:
She is very concealed and will not open up easily to people. She is very trustworthy and loyal to her friends, if she makes any. She is quiet and cold to most people. Especially males, because the thieves that killed her family where all male. She is strong willed and is very determined. After breaking through her cold exterior, people will be shocked to see how kind and joking she is.

Abilities/skills:
Solar: A magical arrow of fire, generated when the weather is hot or the sun is at its highest peak. Doesn't require much concentration to do, because this was the first thing she learned when training under her father. It can be very strong depending on the temperature, or very weak.

Lunar: A magical arrow of shadows, generated in the night, when the moon is out. Takes about 30 seconds to create, and can fire up to five times. It will only work when the moon is out, and if it is dark. Its strong, but also weak against any forms of light.

Nature: A magical dart, created from nature. All thats required is a piece of growing vegetation, and a bit of magic. Its weak, but can be fatal if struck in the correct spots. Commonly used to poison, or paralyze.

Storm: A very powerful magical arrow, of water, or lightning. Its easily conjured during a storm, and can fire rapidly depending on the rainfall or lightning. The arrow is made from water, every time a raindrop his the bow, and only becomes electrified when a flash of lightning shows. Deadly upon contact, when electrified, but also can hit randomly, like raindrops hitting the ground. Hard to handle, but powerful if correct.

Mega Shot Move:
Redemption: A very powerful magical spell, that doesn't inflict damage...It heals. It works better, depending on how injured the person/creature is. The only downfall, it completely drains the user, because it transfers the users energy to the injured person. Its used, when somebody is dying basically. Unexperienced users may pass out after the completion of the spell. It is very easy to use, but has major downfalls.

Weapons:
A black and gold magical bow.
A simple hunting knife.

Theme song:
Haunted – Evanescence

Battle song:
The Guillotine – Escape The Fate

Just to commenton the songs alone, they are awesome
And everything else when it comes to length is great, orignal is what one of the main keys is, i gladly accept this with my mighty accepting powers

Okay i will post my temp soon

[VileMKII]

I had it when I do this, but I had to change up the template. I was super tird when I made it last night so my crative level was low. I made a full backstory, and I changed my Super power move and added an abilty.

[Altered Tundra]

Name: Julius Dra-kon
Age:29
Gender: Male
Race(s):Half Yuna/Half K’da
Appearance:


Weapons of choice:


Pesonality: Julius is always balanced when it comes to his personality. He could tend to be a bit reckless at times, but at other times he could be very careful of what he does. Julius always behaves really evil when he is around his fellow K’Da clan members. How ever when he is around the yuna clan members that he adors so much, he tends to show the softer side of his attitude.When the time comes when Julius is just by himself he shows his normal attitude, the “I don’t give a crap about what you think of me” attitude, and he just does whatever he wants to do.

Bio:
Right at his birth Julius lost both his mom and dad on the night he was born. His mother coming from his gentle Yuna heritage, and his Father coming from his Brutal K’Da side. Being still a baby, Julius was taken in by his Grandfather. Not being a normal member of either clan, Julius doesn’t despise the Yuna and K’da, nor does he like them. He has found himself just to be the outcast of both clans, and at the age of 14 he found himself a part of a distinguished group of outcasts from both clans who have been outcasted or that have ran away from the K’Da, and the Yuna.

After joining the group of outcasts, Julius approached the leader of the group, only 14, Julius said to him…”I challenge you to a fight, if I win I get to train under you and alone, and if you win I leave the group, and never to show again. So what do you say, do you accept.” Julius said. “Sure why not, It will give me something to do, besides just sitting around giving orders.” the leader of the group said.

So readying battle position, with his shortsword in hand. But something happened, as Julius was awaiting for the leader to attack him, his powers awakened. The power that was released was more then that he realized, without knowing Julius had completely destroyed the nameless leader of the group. “I shall take my leave, I only cause destuction where ever I go.” Julius said to the rest of the group as he disappeared into thin air, as he left a trail of ice with traces of lightning sparks in it.

Three years have past since Julius’s has left the outcast group, and he has been training to control his powers, and that has worked out really successful for him. Almost completely mastering his ice and electric elements, he just has to master his lightning element. In order to do that, Julius must get his speed to the stage it needs to be at in order for him to fully master his powers.

After one year of intence speed training, Julius finally finished his mastery of his powers, but to him there is something that doesn’t feel right, as if he forgot something that he needed to finish. “ What the hell, why do I feel that there is something that there must be done.” Julius had said to himself over and over again.

And it just hit him, Julius just remembered that the thing that he couldn’t remember, the day that he mastered his powers was the day he left his grandfather. “ Grandfather I wonder what you are doing right now, I hope that you are doing okay, and hope you could forgive me for leaving you all those years ago.” Julius says as a couple of tear drops run down his eyes.

Abilities:
Ice Matter: This is a simple barrage of medium sized ice balls that have been condensed into hardened ice that are fired at the enemy or enemies at a very high speed dealing minimum damage, but still very affective.

Rising Ice: A more powerful and more effective version of Ice matter, but instead of ice balls being shot at the enemy or enemies, it’s a bunch of ice beams that are being shot out of the hands and eyes of Julius, just by raising his power by 10%, he is able to increase the speed and strength in the beams, to create an even more devastating move

Lightning Spirit: Being a controller of lightning and anything electrical, Julius can produce any kind of lightning based attack. Well in this case, Julius can manipulate his lightning abilities into the form of a lightning dragon, and then by focusing upon the dragon, Julius then can then charge his own power by absorbing the dragon then his power increases. And to finish the move off, he shoots a massive spike that takes the form of a dragon spirit, and charges at any enemy in the surrounding area.

Clapping Shock: This move is totally different than the other variety moves that Julius can use all assets of the electricity he can use. He begins this by gathering all of his power into one hand, and he shoots many, many bolts of high voltage lightning bolts at the enemy, then as the lightning bolts come in contact with the enemy’s, Julius inverts the direction to circle around them, thus making a cycle of lightning bolts randomly attacking the enemy’s that get trapped in the dome of lightning.

Powers:

Ice: Given that julius is a manipulator of ice, he can project it to any form, whether it be an accessory to his weapon, or to a boost in his power. He can also shape it or form it to anything; gas, liquid, or solid, this meaning it can be produced in to a liquid beam or anything like that. For the solid form, this is meaning he can produce it into a solid block of ice, an extention to his blade or even his nails of his hands. however, for the gas it is a matter of having the energy to produce any kind of ice into its gas form. For this it is required for Julius to havecomplete silence and at least half of his original power. The way that this is done is that Julius blows cold gas out of his mouth so gently that it shows a icey blue color just to close into the lungs of passing people, that is the ice form of this power.

Lightning: Ah the power of lightning is a magnificent power indeed, controlling the power it beholds within. The amount of lightning used around planets, the amount compressed into electrical attacks, all of these forms of lightning is available in his grasp. From the healing form of Lightning, to the damage done by one strike of lightning. Truly this is a simple, but devastating power of Julius’s. He is blessed majorly and cursed all at the same time.

Mega Shot Ability:
Falling Storm:
This move is the most dangerous and powerful move that Julius can use. This move is all of the power from his whole body. He first starts out by gathering all of the Ice and Electricity based power throughout his whole entire body, so he can have the power required for the base of the attack. But there is also a speed requirement for Julius to execute this move precisely. So in order to make sure the perfection of this part of the move, Julius jumps high in the air as high and fast as he can. By doing this, Julius can raise his speed almost 300% its original rate.

Having his increased speed and strength, Julius is able now to enter the second stage of Falling Storm. This stage is the second stage or known as the Stage of risks. It got that name from how the whole move could continue or go downhill, depending on how much is done in this stage. In this stage Julius releases his full power into the form of a dragon mixed of both lightning and hardened ice.

At this point Julius is capable of unlimited power. But instead of having the dragon stay in its current form, he instead chants…”Dragon of ice and Lightning, reform of the heavenly rods of speed and become the ignition of the underworld, with help from ice gods.” Right after Julius chants this, the dragon begins to reform into thousands of ice shards and lightning bolts. In hundreds of rows of 100, the ice shards and Lightning bolts shoot up to the sky really fast and with force, creating a series of clouds that form In the sky above the field. Formally being a lush bright sky blue, now the sky is a very damp, yet very evil dark blue color, and the clouds start to form with fierce and trembling sounds. One-by-one the shards and bolts shoot down attacking everything in the field below. Meanwhile Julius is shooting massive waves of ice and lightning strait at the enemy. But when the final Ice shards and Lightning bolts near, the power and intensity of the damage they cause grows more and more until it is catastrophic. And the same goes for Julius his beams get more and more deadly, eventually he turns into some kind of mega demon that only knows violence and becomes unstoppable for a small period of time.

Theme song:

YouTube - Eyeshine - "Here Comes The End Again" Music Video

Battle Theme:

YouTube - Warrior of Ice

[VileMKII]

Hey team, I'll try to post soon. Work along wiht school has been most time consuming. Also I need to know if my change was accepted, I assume so as it was before the game started but alas, I like to know that its okay.