Well, The Warriors Return, They come back from The time from Befores whensville, After defeating the Dragon of SmackerwhackerCracker and walking blindfolded over the Fudged Volcano. But they come to a Rather Disturbing sign
Kai: Hm. Whats this say?
*Kai Reads* Those who pass must Know the Weather, Which is lighter, 100 Pounds of bricks? Or one hundred Pounds of Feathers, Place The Answer in the Gravel.
There are 5 signs on the Ground That Each are Different, One Reading
Bricks More
Feathers Less
Bricks Greater
Feathers Increased
F-B Equal
Kai: Um.
Jack: Your a Fool~ Its Obvious! The Feathers are lighter!
Kai: I Think its a Trap
Jack: Here just take this plack...
*Jack picks up the Feathers Lass plack and continues to put it into the Gravel, Kai then Quickly smacks his hand away*
Kai: Your'e Such a Delinquent, This is obviously a Trap
Jack: This is the EXACT REASON! Why I'm Smarter than you, I know things, But your insy-binsy mind, Prevents you.
FROM
SEEING
O-THER-WI-SE!!!
Kai: Ok! Thats it! Your a complete Waste! All you do is Sleep,Eat,Slam things, And Burp! WOW, OHH LOOK AT ME! IM JACK! AND ALL I LIKE TO DO IS WASTE TIME & not care about me, OR ANY ONE ELSE FOR THAT MATTER's SELF BEING!!!
Jack: OOH, LOOK AT ME, WHOOPDEDOOO, IM KAI, THE JACK-OFF, WHO THINKS HE KNOWS ANYTHING, BUT HE NOTHING LESS THAN A INTERNET FICTIONARY!!!!!
Kai: Ok, YOU WANT SOME OF THIS!!!
Jack: Bring it tiny!!!!!
*Kai and Jack proceed to throw punches, that are Exact and on the point but Seem to have Extreme bruises but not seem to Care about their injuries, They Start to Swing bruce Lee kicks and they Exactly hit on Contact*
Kai: RAAAAAGHHH!!!!
Jack: HYAAAGHH!!!!
*They both then kick each other in the Face....Their is then a LONG PAUSE............................................. .................................................. .................................
Jack & Kai: Ugh
*They both then pass out but still seem a little concious*
Jack: I Hate you....
Kai: Right.....Back...Ugh...At you.
Kai: BR---O----The---R
Fin?
Will they figure out the Puzzle? Will they Resolve their Conflict? Will they Return woken up Concious?
FIND OUT ON ANOTHER GREAT NOVEL OF MY AWESUM STOREY....Wewt.
hey that was good lol they started to fight because they couldn't figure out which was heavier the bricks or the feathers xD then they started to call each other names I liked it can't wait to read the next one. When do you usually release your stories?
Daily, or Weekly, Whichever. :3, And also the Story is about Two Brothers who always fight over Retarted things and have dumb Adventures, Have you ever seen Bobobo~bobobobo? Its kinda like that but with more Interest to it .__. and without the Dumb moves and Random Responses, In bobobo they could be fighting and one could just be like
YOU RUINED MY PERFECT HAIR!! THATS IT!! EPIC NOSE LASH!
Enemy: WAAAHT! ITS OVER 88888888!!! HOWS IS THAT POSSIBLE!
Hero: Thats because I drink my nutrients every daaay!!!
lol thats cool lookin forward to the next I wanna see what retarded things they do next week and what even more retarded answer they come up with. xD keep up the good work
Oh really I think I got it already the answer is in the question cuz the sign says which is heavier one hundred pounds of bricks or one hundred pounds of feathers but they are both one hundred pounds im sure that its but if not oh well.
*A Risen shadow appears holding both of the characters up by the next with them knocked out....And Carries them to his village...*
*They both then wake up and the Shadowy figure removes his Gaiden Cap Revealling a Young lad with a Kitty kap on and Apprentice gloves*
Kai: Who Are you!
*Kai Raises his fists About to swing*
???: !!, Dont Swing kai, I wouldn't Do that If I were you, Your brothers still mad at you, and your still back from your long journey, now is that a way to come back?
Kai: Who?, WHOAREYOU!?HOWDOYOUKNOWMEANDMYBROTHER?
Where are youfromwherearewe!!!?ANSWER!
???:Calm down....Slow your words....
*The strange boy Yawns and puts on his Cape revealing the Initials SG
Kai: Sg?
SG: For short, My name is Sage(Yay sage wins :3 Wewt,)
Kai: But you know everything before it happens? what are you some kind of WizardCaptainHollowerWaver?
Sage: Um...No....Im not a WCHW, I just happen to be a part of InDuSTRY999, This is where you are welcome, I am Sage, as you already know
*Sage Places his hand on Kais forehead then his eyes roll back and turn Hazel Blue
Sage: You have traveled far, have appealed very much conflict.....UHMMMMMM, You liek Mudkipz, and cherry donuts, and keep 2 Boomerangs on your back, You can Distribute your particles, In other words Teleport, and your brother Jack can run at Extreme speeds, and sometimes even Time travel.
Kai: !!!
Sage: Yes, I can read minds, I can also use Teleknesis, And use Strong powers of the mind to move objects, Project force feilds, and many other things that you will soon learn.
*Sage notices a Cross in Kais back pocket
In Voice*Sage: It seems they come from Savage people....
HEH PERFECT
Sage: Come Jack and Kai
Jack and Kai: M'kay
Jack: *Sharpens Teeth with Sword* Hey Dayum, you got any Fresh meat? Sharks? Tuna? WHAAAALES!!!??? *Drools* Machinery? Ill eat it all man ILL EAT IT ALL *dashes away but Kai catches him by his collar and slips
Kai: Calm yourself,
In voice*Sage: This is going to be easy money....
Fin?
Who is this Sage? Can Kai and Jack Trust him? Is he Really from I999? Can he help Jack and Kai? Or is he just some Low down Theif? What are these Telekenesis Users? Find out In the Next novel!!! which will probably be in another Topic!!! Yayyy!!!
lol a guest appearance xD another good one can't wait to see what happens but you don't have to rush you can take you time in writing them so they can be as good as you can possibly get them and again keep up the good work.
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I liked it can't wait to read the next one. When do you usually release your stories?
Linear Mode
