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11-30-2008, 11:17 PM
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what if...
as naruto is sitting on his bed he wonders... he wonders what if... what if zabuza never died what would he be doing now? maybe he would still be working for the same people... or maybe he would be enjoying a peacefull life... maybe... - KNOCK KNOCK. naruto abandens his thoughts of zabuza and answers the doors, "sakura?" naruto shouts as he notices its sakura at the door. "what are you doing here?" "what do you mean what am i doing here?" sakura replies "why arnt you with kakashi!! your late for training idiot!"
to be continued... if u liked this begining then tell me and i shall continue it if not then i shall still continue mwuhahaha but i will accept any comments. this is my first time so go easy on me, oh and plz forget about any spelling mstacks u find in anything i do i have no word office to correct me atm and im a crap speller |
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12-01-2008, 07:10 PM
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...what if... continued
"Cmon naruto what do you think your doing just standing there like an idiot! your gonna be late" as sakura drags him out of his room, naruto shakes of his day dreem he gets on his way to training.
"its about time naruto" kakashi says "i didnt think you would show up" - CRASH BANG. "what was that" sakura shouts, "dunno but lets go look" naruto replys. as thay reach the souce of the sound thay saw a person, at first they could not see anything but then as the somke clears they see a boy, probably about 16 years old, long blond hair in a ponytail, wearing a long red coat. when naruto sees the person he says "my god he is... AMAZINGLY SHORT!!! hahahahaha" "why you,ill kick your ass for that" the mastireous man shouts. to be continued.... same as last time tell me what u think plz ^_^ hope u enjoyed it |
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12-03-2008, 04:25 AM
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ok ill comment then...its funny and seems very interesting...keep writting because I want to see where this goes and if my guess is right...>_>
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12-03-2008, 04:37 AM
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I've gotta say it's a little random-based... Not exactly funny to me, though all I want to know is where all this would lead.
On a side note, improve your grammar... You mispelt over 10 words per paragraph, it's kinda shocking.
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