[Jasuke]

Ok, I'm not too good at this but here it goes:
Story starts after akatsuki is defeated and Naruto bocomes the Hokage. Preety much evry other character is dead (cos i don't feel like they are of any importance).
The Akatsuki was restarted by Me (Jasuke) after an addadination attempt by the konoha nin. The idea is that your characters do not become too strong or too weak cos I don't want this to end too quickly. If you want you can put a shortened version of ur characters life story in the text (no more than once) or eventually can be summarised in the signature with your abilities secialities and friends. So I wish good luck to evry one and pls have fun!

[Kyoshiro-san]

First of all...That is not how you make an intro to your RPg......
Second- If you aren't very good maybe you should check out the guide lines to RPgs or look at other ones to get an idea of what you are supposed to do..

But i will say that this is a good idea...but try to think it out a little more, it looks unfinished to me...


An into looks something like this...

1. Intro
2. Conflict
3. Mission or Resolution to conflict(what is needed to overcome the challenge)
4. Character summary or Character creation rules(what is needed for character to be in the RPg)
5. Rules...ex...
no cursing
up to three characters per person.
so and so has to be this....etc..

[WindShuriken]

Name-Naraki Uchiha

Age-16

Rank-S Rank Missin Nin

Village-Hidden Village In The Leaf



Bio-Naraki had a hard time as a kid since he fought of many assassins as they were trying to kill him because of his power. Naraki has seen many of his friends die right infront of him, killed by the Konoha Anbu. Ever since, he has been bent on revenge on the leaf village and destroy it. He is also the unknown member of the Uchiha. Naraki has yet to master his powers and learn more jutsu.


Jutsu - Rasenshuriken(Wind Rasengan Shuriken), Explosive Clones, Chidori, Kuchiyose No Jutsu (A giant 6 headed hydralisk)

Bloodline(optional)-Uchiha (Mangekyo Sharingan)

Chakra element(s)-Wind, Lighting and Fire

[xOx-aShl3iGh-xOx]

Hey um... is it ok if i join too?

name- Mizuki Ashleigh

age- 15

gender- F

rank- S-rank missing nin.

country and village- Originally from one of the richest villages, the village of the rain. But fled when she was young.

apearance- Waist length, dark, tresses. Big, brown eyes that change color to an icy blue/white color with ancient greek patterning down from the side of her temple to halfway between her cheekbone and chin when activating her blood limit.


chakra element(s)- ice

bloodline trait- Her mother was the jinchuriki of the 3 tailed demon (whose element was ice) so naturally, she took on some of the 3 tailed fox's evil chakra in her blood stream and every so often, that chakra takes over her and she looses herself. The Mizuki clan also has a rare blood limit called Kurayami Genkai. her eyes turn a blue/white color and she has greek patterns on the side of her face. This Genkai allows her to see moisture, (whether it be in the earth or in a body) for her clan is famous for bending water, however, they can not extract water from a living being. Because she has the 3 tailed demons chakra within her, she can only use a limited amount of her own chakra at one time or risk the evil chakra taking over her so as a result, her water bending skills are not as strong. In saying that, because she has the fox demon's chakra in her and it's element is ice, she also has the ability to turn water to ice. So instead of relying completely on bending water as her clan did (and she can't cause her water bending isn't that strong), she uses just a little of her chakra to bend/extract water but most of a combination of her's and the demon's chakra to solidify it and attack/defend with ice.

her specials include

touketsu-buki no jutsu- where she bends and freezes the water she extracts from the atmosphere into an ice weapon of some sort.

koori-te no jutsu- she forces a certain amount of evil chakra combined with her own to her fists so when she punches somebody, the chakra is forced into the body of the opponent and the chakra inside the area that is hit freezes, usually preventing that body part from moving.

takai-te no jutsu- works simular to koori-te, except more evil chakra is forced down so it can attack more than the chakra. e.g freeze a vital organ and kill them. but the risk of this is it releases a lot of evil chakra so she will often loose control of herself.

downfalls- she can only use her water/ice bending skill a limited amount of times because the evil chakra in her far exceeds her own. So when she uses these water/ice skills, it uses both her chakra and the evil chakra but if she isn't careful, she will use too much of her own chakra so she will loose control over the evil chakra and it will far over power her's and take over her body. If this gets too far, it can potentially kill her because the .
overflow of chakra is too much for her body to handle.


short bio- Ash was born in the hidden village of the rain as part of the Mizuki clan. Ash's mother was the jinchuriki of the 3 tail demon fox.The rain village tried to extract the power's of the kyuubi within ash's mother, through experimentation, but because they made it such a massive deal, Akatsuki found out about the kyuubi powers and kidnapped ash's mother. The rain village didn't even try to retrieve her, instead, tried to find a way to extract the powers/kyuubi chakra from Ash by experimenting on her. So she was experimented on ever since she was a baby and when she was 7, the chemicals/methods etc got too much and the evil chakra inside ash became unstable and took over. She killed the scientists and fled from the lab and the village. Because she wasn't the real jinchuriki, the evil chakra soon wore off and she woke up away from the village. She has been fleeing and the village has been searching for her ever since as well as many others for various reasons. She has a massive bounty on her head because she is seen as dangerous and a failed experiment, (especially since the experimenting has made her/the kyuubi chakra unstable.) Her goal has been to avenger her mother by murdering the old kage of the rain village, Sakuno Haru, because he was the one that put her mother in danger and also the one that screwed up Ash's life. But the problem is, when she escaped, Haru didn't want to face his mistake so fled from the village shortly after. Ash keeps on searching.

Personality: Ash is kind-hearted on the inside but often acts cold because she is distrusting. (well, can you blame her?) But once you gain her trust, she's really nice.

she uses ninjutsu and taijutsu. (looks like the picture except dark hair.)

[Nightly]

Can i Join?..... (ive never done this before)

Name: Yousuke Mushita

Age:18

Gender:M

Village:Started at Sunagkure(hidden Sand) but is traveling By himself

Rank: S-Rank(missing nin)

Bio:he knows nothing of his family(he was abandoned),As An Academy Student he was shunned by all except Houshin.
they be came friends until he was killed by a Rock Vill nin in the chunin exams
he fled his village in search for revenge on the Rock vill.failed assignation of the kage of the village he fled to regroup in search for a team to help him destroy the rock vill.in his Search he Create's two Really Thin Blades witch he can summon with the scrolls he has.he continues his journey towards the Konoha

Appearance: Average height,
Grey Travel Cloak,
Long Black Pants(like kakashi's)
Net Shirt with black No Sleeve Shirt Over The Top
Short Brown Hair
Fingerless Gloves
Jutsu:

Infinite sand storm devastation-shooting a extremely strong blast of wind
sand shuirken-shooting several shurikens made from sand

Dougan- like rasengan only half the size, Purple, lighting Spitting out of it(like Chidori)

Raebo no jutsu(bloodline trait jutsu)- he is able to move at tremendous speeds fast the lee but... puts requires lot of chakra to maintain

Raedo no jutsu(bloodline trait jutsu)- makes mutiple clones that can move the same speed as the Raebo jutsu..... but puts an even larger strain on Chakra limit

Raenoka Blade Summoning Scrolls(not really a jutsu but o well)-summons two Thin Blades that he is able to extend with his chakra.the blades then r sharper then steel

Bloodline Trait: Raenoka

Chakra element: Wind

Personality: Has Very Strong Feelings,quite,can be hesitant to kill familys with small children

Mainly Uses Taijutsu over Ninjutsu dosent no genjutsu, his main jutsu he uses is Raenoka Blade Summoning Scrolls


Plz tell me if it needs more info

[omega 5000]

Dude, look at the dates.. and Jasuke isn't even on anymore >_>

[ichijin]

The thread was made a little over a week ago, and the RP just somehow made itself...

Well, anyways Jasuke doesn't seem to be on right now, nor does he seem to be checking this thread.

I'm locking this, if he wishes to continue then he'll have to PM me to unlock it.