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Old 08-22-2008, 03:36 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Wink A Ninga Story

The Story So Far:
70 years after narutos story a resistance to the current order happens and all the countries are in danger,konoha is under the hokage of kin also known as the 8th hokage. Suna is growing well, as for the other countries they have started growing in chaos. There are talented ninga from all the countries coming to konoha as the chunnin exams start in 1 month. New techniques are starting to appear as well as clans. The uchiha clan is rising back to it's former glory. and ninga are now abundent. The akatski also somehow survived and is stronger than ever.

ok now add plenty of detail while creating your charatars ok.
also the highest rank you can begin at is gennin.
you can be from any village
you can also be a missing-nin
or akatski member(recruit)
use your imagination.
i will aprove or deny your entry to it based off of you template


ok now for rules
1.no godmodding
2.no super strong charatars
3.you grow in the game not just start out amazing
4.up to 2 elements
5.some people can teach you elements


now this is the template to join

Template:

name-
age-
gender-
rank-
village-
apearance-
bio-
chakra element(s)-
bloodline trait- (optional)


here is mine

name-Hier,Lars
age-12
gender-Male
rank-Genin
village-konoha
apearance-(http://media.photobucket.com/image/n...uto-2.jpg?o=81) this is how he looks(descendant of naruto)
personality-kind yet not crazily kind, hates suffering not afraid of much
bio-he has never known parents only his great grand parents who died on lars's 3 birthday, and does not know how it feels to have parents as the died as he was born as a three year old he has protected himself. graduated easily and know some shadow clone techniques.
chakra element(s)-wind
bloodline trait-has no true one his great grandparents hinata hyuga and naruto uzimaki, he has the byakugan and part of the kyubiis chakra was passed down through the generations

we need 4 people to start.
also one more thing it is a RULE:Have Fun

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Old 08-22-2008, 05:04 AM   #2 (permalink)
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apearance- A little taller for his age with waist length black hair in a big pony tail with a few strands straying away in the front.
bio- Raika is the last of his family, The only child left in the Kujirame family. Raika lives with his mother and his grandfather. Nothing much is known about the Kujirame clan except the have a Dojutsu called the "Kuragan".
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Old 08-22-2008, 02:11 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 08-22-2008, 02:18 PM   #4 (permalink)
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At the the moment, I think nearly every Bio would be alright with him... Apparently this storyline is built on the NaruHina couple, which I, to be honest don't see happening, and that you can be a descendant of Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura, or bloody Pein for all I care... In other words, this RP scores little to no points in originality. Moreover that template is ripped straight from Naomi's RP... And even more uh... I don't know how to put it nicely, but I'll just say you don't know how to spell Ninja... You're pretty illiterate aren't you?... I'm actually here, dumbfounded that a fan of Naruto can't even spell Ninja...

Mean aren't I? Sorry, but I'm always like this... Role Playing is all about imagination, historical accuracy (whether real history or anime, it doesn't matter), literacy, and originality. What's the use of imagination without originality? You lack it within your character, historical accuracy is off too, it hasn't even been decided who Naruto ends up with, so unless you can prove that Naruto and Hinata are married, then you lose in historical accuracy. Literacy as I've demonstrated, is that you can't spell ninja. This is a ninja RP, and you can't spell Ninja...

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Old 08-26-2008, 03:33 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Old 08-26-2008, 11:56 PM   #6 (permalink)
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well..thats nice....thought not very creative.....and not thought out, because if your sasuke then were going to need a naruto a sakura and other peeps
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