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Old 07-22-2008, 11:18 AM   #111 (permalink)
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"Three Blades of the Bird...", said Karasu. It was felt, that within a single slash, Karasu had performed three, the clones that were on top of him were slaughtered in the powerful flurry. But it was apparent that his opponent liked to use explosions. With this in mind, he concentrated chakra into his hand. As much as possible, and in the quickest time possible. Within the second, he'd gathered enough of his wind Chakra to be able to punch the mountain he was on, and dismantle it in a brief windstorm. And that he did, and at the exact same moment, explosions echoed throughout the area as the tornado raged. He used much of his chakra to avoid this fatality. But it was worth it, it's been quite awhile since he'd ever used this much chakra.

He was once again in the air, his vision was slowly coming back, but he was still mostly blind, looks like his opponent is beginning to become weary. After he landed, he eased himself up again, the mountains, he could make out that there were many, and from his senses, clones were on them. Within a second, clones began to barrage at him, they were preventing escape? Useless, his defense was perfect, slicing them was no hard task, rather it was like cutting targets. Too slow he thought. Maybe he should just finish it now... Yea... Maybe he will, with little notice, he thrust his blade in Raika's direction, and in an instant, a blade of chakra shot right out of it. An extended blade, shooting and aiming towards finishing Raika off. If he were able to avoid fatality, he's worthy of praise, if not, he's dead. Who cares.
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Old 07-22-2008, 07:31 PM   #112 (permalink)
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name- Gondara Sennin

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short bio-his brother killed everyone in his clan, only he was left.....after the extermination of his clan, he adopted a secluded life and swore to take revenge on him....when he was 13, he 1st took the chuunin exams and his whole squad was killed....after that he became the biggest loner of the village, has only unlocked 5 of the 6 rings of his rinnegan....whne the 6th is finally activated, he gains imortality as well as the ability to use several bodies at once

chakra element(s)-Lightning

bloodline trait- (optional) Rinnegan, just like ever other one in his clan, when he was born, he had a tattoe put on his arm, so when he ran his blood along it he would summon a dark wolf which when its back is patted 3 times, it gorws from 4' tall to 12' tall

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Old 07-22-2008, 09:24 PM   #113 (permalink)
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OoC: Its a bit late to be joining the RP?

Raika looked in the air. A huge beam was coming down. But his body didn't to move. He shouted in complete fear, anger and suffering. "I WILL NOT DIE THIS DAY!! AAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!" And with that a mass amount of energy and chakra came back to him. He felt a strange sensation in his eye. He looked up at Karasu. His eyes had changed again. The 5 circles that spiraled towards his pupil changed into a star. But it was all in vein. He only moved enough to have it peirce through his stomach. He felt an intense pain. He put his hand on his stomach and then looked down. Blood was spilt all over the mountain. The entrails from his bodys were hanging out and slowly falling. In that moment Raika fell to his knees. He formed the last seal he would ever. In the moment he gained his eyes. He learned the Kujirame clans most powerful secret. He reached his hand into the the sky, covered and blood and shouted. "KUJIRAME STYLE: DECENDING SKY DRAAAAGON!!" And with that Raika poured his entire chakra reserve into his final technique, a summoning technique. The sky blackened. Clouds formed. Thunder claps roared heavily. A massive roar came from the sky. A body began to show. It looked like a giant snake that never ended. Its underbelly was brownish and the top half of it was red. The massive dragons head showed. Long whiskers, a big snout and massive eyes shown. Raika looked up as blood poured from his mouth. "T...T...Tokalu...." He tried to call out. The massive dragon appeared in front of the near dead Raika. The dragon roared as it watched its master die. The massive dragon turned and took a deep breath before its contradictory breath was blown out. Its element was Ice. The mangled mountain was instantly turned to ice, again. Raika coughed with a light smile. As his vision slowly faded.
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Old 07-23-2008, 07:45 AM   #114 (permalink)
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OOC: What a way to go

The light show was interesting yet. The dragon itself, if his opponent were to have kept fighting, he wouldn't be able to handle the dragon in this state. The frozen mountain, was now his opponent's grave, Karasu retracted his weapon, and eased his stance, taking a moment to honor his opponent. Worthy of praise, definitely...
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Old 07-23-2008, 04:19 PM   #115 (permalink)
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OoC: Thank you. =D It actually took me some time to come up with. I sat at my computer for like 10 minutes and was like. "Damn...How should I do this?" Then it came to me...Kill my character! =P I was originally gonna keep my character fighting. But I thought this would be much more interesting.
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Old 07-23-2008, 04:22 PM   #116 (permalink)
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OOC: soooo am i in?
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Old 07-23-2008, 11:12 PM   #117 (permalink)
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ooc: chamber twist it is alittle late to be joining plus the fact that your character can gain inmortailty seems like godmodding to me so no your not in. And nice job dying gaara....if you still want to continue with this you can make another character.

Tokalu watched as raika was litteraly almost cut in half. "RAIKA!!!!" tokalu yelled as he attempted to reach his friend but it was to late. While raika was dying he had made one last move and summoned a hauge endless dragon. The dragons breath turned the mountain to ice as tokalu ran to raikas body. He placed his had on raikas shoulder "I could have called you a friend...I..I.." tokalu was at a loss for words. He had seen many people die but never anyone he had worked with. Tokalu stood up. Even though there was a slim chance of him winning one on one he felt his chakra soaring. I cant let karasu get away Tokalu thought as he clenched his fist and turned taking a battle stance. He kept glancing at the dragon also wondering what it would do.
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OOC: well when i say immortality, i mean like immortality from old age, he can still be killed, but he doesnt die from old age is what i ment T_T
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OOC: Immortal or not, if you can't overcome my speed, your Rinnegan is actually useless.

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After the honoring glance, he noticed that his opponent's friend, who got up and was ready to fight. His opponent, was angry, wounded to a fair degree, he could win this too easily. But it was the guy's job... He didn't feel like fighting anyone else anymore, well, only temporarily at least,

"I'm not gonna fight you... You're not in any condition for a definite win, nor are you in any condition to keep up with me", said Karasu. The giant dragon... Should be gone, this is a little strange. Whatever it was, retreat would be the best thing to do.
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OoC: Thank you Ayame! =D I will make another character. Should I fill out the template again? =)

The massive dragon roared once more before slowly fading away. The mountains even faded away slowly into the earth. The dragon disappeared back into the sky. Raika laid there dead. His spirit passing onto the next world. The sunlight came. It seemed like it was shining down just on Raika. He had a smile on his face when he died. Raika's spirit was smiling down on the young Tokalu. Seemingly he whispered to him. "Fight no longer, my wounded friend. Let your body rest."
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