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Old 04-30-2008, 02:52 AM   #1 (permalink)
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1Person can be as strong as a kage
2You pick your own rank
3You can make your jutsu's up for your person
4Tell a little bio about you person

Name:Akuma
Age:19
Gender:Male
Village:Hidden Wind Village
Rank:S Class Ninja
Looks:long red hair tall a black ninja suit
Bio: An up coming ninja from the village he is genius ninja passed Chunin exams first try
Kekkai Genkai-Death Palm
Relation-Grandson of founder of the village
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Nature Manipulations- Wind,Earth,Fire,Water,Lightning
The Story- In small village of wind a civil war breaks out to take control over village for who is the next Kage. There are four clans Wolf clan,Snake clan,Wind Clan,Death Clan The wolf clan started the village. The sanke clan is what was left of the sound village. Wind Clan are the peace makers of the village. The Death Clan is the ninja who go on suicide missions or all the hard missions jonin wont do.
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Old 04-30-2008, 08:44 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Right now... i can say a whole list of things that're wrong with this RP...

1. Naruto hasn't even finished yet, so your "The Story" is impossible until the actual Naruto storyline has finished
2. Pain's little brother? please be more original! this is simply ridiculous
3. The rules give ALOT of room for godmoding
4. You have the Rin'negan? if you read the manga, only one person is allowed the Rin'negan per generation, and the Rin'negan actually doesn't pass through people by bloodline, so it's impossible for you to have it anyways.

Sorry to critisize, but you obviously need a much better imagination than that
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Old 05-01-2008, 03:07 AM   #3 (permalink)
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you missed whole point that was the point that is the imagination because we all
ready know whats gone happen anyway so why not
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Old 05-01-2008, 06:12 AM   #4 (permalink)
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ready know whats gone happen anyway so why not
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Right now... i can say a whole list of things that're wrong with this RP...

1. Naruto hasn't even finished yet, so your "The Story" is impossible until the actual Naruto storyline has finished
2. Pain's little brother? please be more original! this is simply ridiculous
3. The rules give ALOT of room for godmoding
4. You have the Rin'negan? if you read the manga, only one person is allowed the Rin'negan per generation, and the Rin'negan actually doesn't pass through people by bloodline, so it's impossible for you to have it anyways.

Sorry to critisize, but you obviously need a much better imagination than that
You don't know how hypocritical that was, you said "use our imagination", right? then begin to use your imagination on at least your character, it's extremely uncreative, i see a couple of 5 years olds make something better. Though your after story didn't cover enough ground, since the world of Naruto is a full fledged second world, you'll have to cover the grounds on the current status of every single village, briefly would be good enough.

And no... not all of us know what's going to happen, actually none of us know what's going to happen at the end, the series is not only far from finish but it's unpredictable, there may even be some huge event that has a gigantic effect on the whole world of Naruto sometime in the future of Naruto, you never know, we can only guess.
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