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Old 06-19-2008, 09:30 AM   #211 (permalink)
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"Arrgh!!", Kaito screams, after which he then immediately smiles, "Gotcha", Kaito had used water replacement jutsu and the shoulder that was ripped through was now made of water. The water reforms as Kaito jumps back and his shoulder was as good as knew, suddenly a pain erupted from his stomach, "Ar..." Kaito throws up blood, "Shi...", again more blood comes out. Kaito looks up and says, "Damn Stomach not now", Kaito creates a Water Clone which then proceeds to go to Ayame, "I Advise you to get out of here Ayame," the clone said, "Raika is now out of control, i need to calm him down," Kaito does some quick handsigns and says, "Shadow Clone Explosion Jutsu," Another water clone appears next to Raika and explodes with the force of a C4 bomb.
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Old 06-19-2008, 06:34 PM   #212 (permalink)
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Raika laughed evilly. The thread covered the clone almost instantly. "AHAHA!!!!" Both of the Raikas lauged evilly. The Fake Raika held down Kale. The Real Raika only laughed. The thread seemed feeble, but in actuality its was as hard as diamonds were. The real Raika continued to laugh as he was crouched down on all fours. "Hehehe...." Raika snickered. The threads began to cover him. The thread undid itself and The Real Raika was gone. Raika appeared next to Kaito. The palm of the Real Raika's hand opened. He shoved it into Kaitos back. The thread peirced all the way through Kaito's body. "If you guys had just left me alone...And let me interrigate Kale...This would never have happened." The Real Raika said quite loudly. "Yeah, Then we'd know about Adrian and what kind of games he was playing." The Fake Raika added. The Real Raika heard a click. "Oh...N--" He grabbed Ayame and hit the ground quickly. BOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!! The quiet forest where they we're was rocked by the massive explosion of c4.

Chaos began to descend onto the 4 person team. What was to become of them?

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Old 06-20-2008, 12:05 AM   #213 (permalink)
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In the midst of the explosion Kale managed to break free from Raika's clone and a dome of pitch black darkness surrounded him. He was on his hands and knees breathing heavily and looking at the ground. He could hear the explosion but could see nothing, nor could he be seen through the darkness. He could feel an intense pain in his head, and heart. What is this? he thought, his breathing becoming heavier. Could this be what Adrian spoke of?...Did he actually do something to me?... He dug his fingers into the dirt and grass, and tightly shut his eyes, a drop of sweat falling from his face to the ground. He clenched his teeth, trying to control the breathing and calm the pain. Something's....Wrong with me....
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Old 06-20-2008, 02:24 PM   #214 (permalink)
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OoC: Where is everyone?! =(

Raika writhed in pain on the ground. He stood up. Howling in pain as if he were an animal dying. He howled in pain for a few minutes before he looked around. Realizing the destruction he caused. Kale caught his eye and his clone was gone. Raikas vision went blurry. He could feel a pain in his chest. He looked down. There was a sharp rock lodged into his right lung. He smiled lightly and scoffed. "Some people................Have..............All....The ...........Luck." Raika coughed out a bunch of blood. He fell to the ground. Blood poured from his mouth. He looked up and coughed some more. The night finally had set in. The moon was high in the sky. And the stars twinkeled brightly. "I wonder...Maybe Im not meant for this earth..." He said with a light smile. Coughing out more blood. Raika began to shiver.
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Old 06-20-2008, 03:13 PM   #215 (permalink)
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OOC: Dunno....

Kale fell to his side, gripping his stomach. His eyes were still closed, and his teeth still clenched. He could feel something inside him start over powering him. I can't let this happen!....Not now!... he thought, moving his right hand down to the pouch strapped to his thigh. I only have one choice.... He opened the pouch, his whole body shaking, and pulled out a kunai. His hand was shaking uncontrollably and he almost dropped the kunai while positioning it next to his stomach. Here goes.... he thought, jabbing the kunai right into his stomach, not all the way of course. He refrained from yelling, but clenched his teeth harder and tightened his body. The thing that was over powering him seemed to evaporate and now the only pain he felt was the kunai in his stomach. He pulled it out and dropped it, putting his hands over the wound, which was now spilling blood. It's....gone.... He was still breathing heavily, but because of his wound now. He struggled to his hands and knees. The dark dome around him fell down like a waterfall, but once it hit the ground it just disappeared. Kale glanced up, only one eye open and he saw Raika. What....happened?... he thought, grabbing his stomach tighter, trying to stop the bleeding.
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Old 06-20-2008, 04:06 PM   #216 (permalink)
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it was a good story...i thought it was interesting...
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Old 06-20-2008, 07:35 PM   #217 (permalink)
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ooc: im sorry I was gone guys...long story short I was at a friends and she doesnt have a computer...so yea ill catch up now.

Ayame had watched the fight. There was no use getting envolved plus if they all tore eachother up someone would have to help peice them back together. One of Kaito's clone approched her and told her to get out of the area. "What? im no-" Suddenly Raika had jumped and pinned her down then there was a huge explosion.

Ayame yelped alittle as something flew through the air and banged up her knee. She was covered in dust and when she opened her eyes Ayame saw raika coughing up blood and fall over still bleeding. Ayame was in shock, she glanced around quickly and saw kale also injured and the area destroyed. "Why.." she started quietly her voice getting louder " Why...why did yall have to fight! Its senseless completely senseless!! Thats it this mission is over now! Raika needs to see a medic we all probobly do after that explosion and im not going to let any of the first friends Ive had in years die!" screaming her words at the end. Then she turned around to Raika talking softly now. "and why...why did you save me? you should have gotten out of here yourself instead of protecting me from the blast..." Ayame worked carefully picking raika up. She turned toward Kaito and Kale "Now you two can either help me get him back or stand there like shocked little kids!"
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Old 06-20-2008, 09:30 PM   #218 (permalink)
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Kale got to his feet, gripping his stomach, half ignoring Ayame's words, but listening to her finish; since she yelled it. "Friends?....." he mumbled, still breathing heavily, but not as heavy as before. He stumbled over to Raika and Ayame, releasing his stomach; the blood flow stopping, but his clothes covered in it. He held out his left arm/hand, offering to help carry Raika, which was well out of his 'comfort zone'.
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Old 06-20-2008, 10:45 PM   #219 (permalink)
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O.OC=I sorta let some one post after me and i ended up forgetting to post....

Kaito walks up to Raika, Sorry Mate I Went To Far, but I needed you to calm down," Kaito sees Raika shivering, "ohh crap, guys move back NOW!," Raika seemed on the verge of death, "Guys stand back, Im going to do a forbidden jutsu, and i don't want you to see so please close your eyes or turn around," while saying this he was already removing Raika's clothes with a kunai, and soon Raika was in his boxers Kaito says to Raika, "Hang in there mate this might Sting," Kaito immediatly did a long string of handsigns so fast it was hard to see them. "Body Revival Jutsu", another forbidden jutsu that Kaito learned, where he uses another couple of years of his life to revive Raika, Kaito places his hand and immediately a large white light shone, and now Raika was now okay, his mental stress and body wounds had gone. Kaito turns and throws up blood on the ground, from the pain in his stomach wound.
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Old 06-21-2008, 03:42 AM   #220 (permalink)
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ooc: no problem DarkKyuubi.

Kaito had taken over healing raika and wouldnt let her or kale watch. When they were allowed to turn around he had healed raika but was throwing up blood again. Raika was going to be ok or so it seemed but ayame was still worried. She walked over and sat down next to were he was laying and put her hand on his shoulder. She looked at Kaito "Are your ok?" she asked in a very plain ,but still worried voice "You've been coughing up blood lately" Then she looked at Kale "And did that wound of yours stop bleeding?" finaly she looked down at Raika but she didnt know what to say. Ayame was about to cry but she didnt know why. She looked away from all of them. "We cant have this happen again...." she said barley loud enough to hear "Yall are my only friends and if anything happened to any of yall I couldnt take it...I know we havent known eachother long but....I care about you guys" she said looking back at them her eyes starting to water "If I can see all of you as my friends why cant yall do the same?"
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