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Freed Wolf
Jounin (上忍)
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: on the edge of sanity...I am almost sain
Posts: 810
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sure I'd like to see it please
also may I try again on a later date I mean I'm sure I'd be a little better in a years time(or more or less) Last edited by Rune Scapes O09.5; 04-05-2008 at 12:19 AM. |
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Senior Member
Jounin (上忍)
Join Date: May 2008
Location: Village Hidden in the Computer XDD
Posts: 566
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Here you go, Hope You Like It
PART 1: I am sitting on a step and I am looking out into my backyard. The grass is cut short by the way for the first time in weeks, a red pavement follows the side of the grass near the wall, that leads to a wooden deck, which has a large pool, which is nice clear and clean. I see white plastic chairs surrounding a large plastic table with a striped umbrella, covering the entire table with nice shade, the sun is shining brightly in the afternoon. There is a outhouse next to the pool beautiful birds flying in the sky. Parrots, sparrows and lots more. There is a green metal fence surrounding the backyard and in front of the fence lots of plants, which I have to water everyday. Slowly I stand up and walk through the grass feeling the soft yet prickly grass between my toes and under my feet. My Labrador (Nova is a Male) runs up to me and I rub his back a he sits next to me feeling the softness of his fur on my hands. He lifts his head and licks me on the face. Anyway back to the backyard, the trees and plants along the fence are very colourful and radiate onto the background. I look back at my house and its nice and has a brick exterior. Against the wall is my bike three years old and it’s been awhile since I rode it, covered in cobwebs and the chain has rusted completely. I slowly get up and walk to the house, halfway there I pick up a toy on the ground, which belongs to Nova and throw it to distract him, and using the distraction I enter the house, into my living room and sit on my couch. PART 2: Akira stands ontop a cliff in the night looking up at the stars waiting for someone, someone who she surely would kill tonight. “I thought you might be here Akira,” said Gin, “Isn’t this where we first met?”. “Shut It” muttered Akira, “You know the reason why we are here so lets get it started”. Akira turned around and took his fighting stance, Gin just looks at her and smiles sadly and says, “Akira, I am not going to fight you, I Love you,”. “I said SHUT IT”, Akira said loudly, “I don’t care I am here to avenge my family”, she suddenly disappears fro the front of Gin and appears behind him and brings a swift side chop to the side of Gin’s neck, but she misses since Gin was already behind her, “Please Akira don’t do this”, by the sudden voice Akira gets a shock but recovers almost immediately and brings her elbow back aiming to hit him in the face, but it was futile Gin saw it coming and dodges it, and then grabbing her, he pulls her back using her own momentum into his arms and he says softly in her ears, “I love you, you do know that right”, and then he dips her and kisses her on the lips. She gives in for a split second before pushing him off her and straightens out. “Why?” She enquired, “Why did you kill them without any remorse huh? GIN”, she shouts out of anger and sadness at the same time, a small tear rolled down her beautiful cheek which looked like a pearl in the moonlight, “WHY GIN?”, Gin looks at her sadly and said, “It was to protect you, they were going to kill you, to kill you for going out with me”. “DON’T LIE” Akira shouts and wildly attacks Gin, who then again disappears and is standing near the edge of the cliff, “I’m telling the truth Akira”, “SHUT UP!”, shouts Akira and jumps forward and lands a punch square on his chest, Gin lets it land and stumbles back and off the cliff, “I’m Sorry Akira”, Gin says softly to her with a sad smile as he slowly plummets to his death. Akira looks at him with a shock looked on her face which then is replaced with a sort of forced silent sad face, she then turns around and walks off towards the village, silently pearls of water fall to the ground as she cries uncontrollably. Suddenly she stops and looks at the sky and screams with all her might, the name of her lover, the name of Gin. |
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