[PuppetShadow]

Well, for one thing, it doesn't even follow the format, I (and I'm sure nobody else) can understand anything about it, and your spelling and grammar is purely, absolutely atrocious. I don't want a garbage RP.

I know I'm being extremely brash, rude, judgmental, etc., but... whatever. Either fix your character to acceptable standards or you're not in.

I'll probably put it up in the next couple of days.

EDIT: Infact, I'm going to set up a set of rules, so look back to the first post soon.