Right now... i can say a whole list of things that're wrong with this RP...
1. Naruto hasn't even finished yet, so your "The Story" is impossible until the actual Naruto storyline has finished
2. Pain's little brother? please be more original! this is simply ridiculous
3. The rules give ALOT of room for godmoding
4. You have the Rin'negan? if you read the manga, only one person is allowed the Rin'negan per generation, and the Rin'negan actually doesn't pass through people by bloodline, so it's impossible for you to have it anyways.
Sorry to critisize, but you obviously need a much better imagination than that
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